IFP deleted scene 'part 16b'

references used were the craving control comic art by titan one [link] and [link] for the middle two panels and the door design, chokuryu [link] for the first panel, foxfire5 [link] for maggie in the third panel, claire is based on a part of the heather sequence by Kastemel and this [link] also by Kastemel was used for maggies hand in the third panel

I hope this makes sense to people, this is the follow on strip for part 16 [link] ie part 16b. Its a deleted scene in that i thought about doing it at the time but wanted to get the story moving quicker so decided against it. I even mentioned my desire to do this in the comments of part 16.

I'm not sure if you should count this as canon or not, i'll leave it up to you to decide.

it came about from a reluctance to start anything substantial at the moment and news that craving contol will probably be deleted very soon (i needed to to get that ripping shot). i suggest you save anything you like from it before it does

heres the link to the comic [link]

to expain what happened in case you didnt get it,
In true Magiver style maggie used the scissors from the first aid kit in the bathroom cabinet to turn her ripped dress in to a crop top and skirt, thus saving herself much emabarrassement

this also features claire from the sexification sequence [link] who works in the cinema.

Im not sure if Claire liking maggies style is the reson behind her wearing gradually more revealing clothes, I'll leave it to you to decide.